You need to put more work in.
I can name a few things wrong with this. First off, use correct spelling and keep away from netspeak, this probably doesn't seem important to you, but correct grammar is a must for a serious flash with any sort of text. In order for it to be taken seriously you need it to sound like it wasnt made by a random twelve year old. Try to use more Mario or SNES looking text, too. Plain text at that size can be rather hard to see against some colors for certain people. Also, you need to change the music for the fight scene. It's rather annoying to hear the same song three times, and it really takes away from the experience. Sound is a vital part of life that people use to define reality. You should remake this with these things in mind. You will probably get a higher score because it will look and sound better.