Needs a lot of work
The animation is pretty good, but like anything, animation isnt the core of the object. The voices need to be synced with the animationl; and also, the person that voiced the character on the left needs to practice speaking into a microphone better. If you blow into a microphone, or have any background noise, yes people WILL hear it, and it will distract the viewer from the plot of the flash. Don't think of this as a person insulting you guys, this advice will really help, and yeah, it is annoying to synch sound with mouth movement at first.